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He always stands very close to people when he speaks to them, staring with those huge golden eyes and leaning in ever so slightly, as if he is craving their touch and the feel of their breath and their hands more than anything. This is the first thing you notice when you meet him, the closeness. You ache, for a reason you don't know, to bridge the gap. To touch him. Your fingers twitch towards him but you keep your hands beside you.
And then you hear him speak, and everything else seems loud and bright and harsh compared to the gentleness of him. His lips are chapped and his big galaxy earrings glitter and his hair stands straight up and his freckles are like kisses, and you think he will sound like all the others and then he speaks; he speaks and something shifts inside you and a little storm begins to crackle and swell inside your chest and suddenly you love him more than anything.
And then he finishes asking you the time, and you tell him, and he walks on.
Okay this is Bryce he is pretty okay and things I write about him

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Thank you so much for the Daily Deviation! It means so much to me that people on here appreciate my work :heart: I'm just going to say thank you here to all you lovely people who commented on this: THANK YOU! And I love you tons and tons you wonderful sweeties. :iconbunnyglompplz:
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Given 2013-05-02
Bryce by ~SugarHeartedGirl is an unexpectedly heartbreaking vignette. ( Featured by neurotype )
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Tales-of-Tao Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Student General Artist
 Hi! This lovely work has been featured here: fav.me/d6uqz9a.
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Sigma-Echo-Seven Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Student Writer
What a fascinating character portrait. Excellently described!
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Karinta Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Student General Artist
I like it a lot. You've painted a perfect portrait with your words.
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xlntwtch Featured By Owner May 3, 2013   Writer
Congrats on the DD. This piece is so unexpected at the end, yet so briefly and wonderfully told, it's a definite :+fav: Thanks.
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goodgirl4 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Student Filmographer
:heart:
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karmacursed Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A very sweet succinct peice of writing. Nice work.
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SimplySilent Featured By Owner May 2, 2013
:heart: Congrats on the DD! :clap:
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz: :iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
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xxConcreteRose Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, I loved it. It's so honest and sweet. I felt my heart racing a little too
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GaleSpider Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Really short and sweet. Shows the wanting desire to get near him. Congratulations on the DD!
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calabogie2007 Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
c: dawww thats so cute
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The-Lost-Hope Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Congratulations on the Daily Deviation! :clap: And beautifully written, so sweet.
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Sir-Herp Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student General Artist
That abrupt ending, I love it. I don't read enough non-novels; this was really cool. Great introduction to him, and congrats on the well-deserved DD.
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FairyBishop Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is so sweet and sad...
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WontDieACopy71 Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Achingly beautiful. I think every person knows someone like that, someone who just touches them. Gorgeous piece!
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ValiantShadow Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student General Artist
This is amazing. The length of the description is drawn out and makes you feel like it will last forever, but the sudden ending changes that completely. Wonderful!
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Samiferismyotp Featured By Owner May 2, 2013
I really like this. It's very lovely :)
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SMAdams Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful work. I love how easily you are transferred into the situation yourself, seemingly experiencing it at that moment. Every word, every fluctuation in the sentences, is perfect - the ultimate epitome of fantastic.

:clap: :heart:
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SmilingOfTheHealer Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful writing, it really touches the heart! :iconblush--plz:
Great job, and well deserved DD! :clap:
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MidnightTiger8140 Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very beautiful, and very sad T~T
You did a great job of making us fall for him, and then the sudden heartbreak at the end...
The suddenness and concision of the ending was really effective in making me wish that the moment could last longer...feels so much like real life. :(

Congratulations on the DD! ^_^
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SondosG Featured By Owner May 2, 2013
beautiful
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srcpcsoha Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Congrats on the DD!
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:iconpanhead13:
Panhead13 Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Kinda funny.
Jus asking the time
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lintu47 Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
    Congrats on the DD! :dalove:
    Have a nice day! :heart:
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Pikachu-28 Featured By Owner May 2, 2013
:squee: :happybounce:
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:iconherrlinde:
HerrLinde Featured By Owner May 2, 2013
I felt sad when it ended so suddenly, something in me wanted the story to continu forever
I... I think I fell for Bryce too
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ImTheMangaka Featured By Owner May 2, 2013
LOL then that makes us two. it makes your heart beat fast and you want to know if he's ritgh behind you kissing your neck...
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SugarHeartedGirl Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you both so much :heart: I'm really glad this reached you.
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ImTheMangaka Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
NO thank you for Sharring this :iconletmehugyouplz:
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vanmall Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congrats on the Daily Deviation! :happybounce:
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SugarHeartedGirl Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks~
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vanmall Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome. :aww:
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neurotype Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think that second person works best in punches, and this certainly carries one. The close observation of Bryce ends on a rather unexpected note :P
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:iconsugarheartedgirl:
SugarHeartedGirl Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much, sweetie! Especially for the DD, omg! :heart:
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neurotype Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:giggle:
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dreamcatcherlela Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow! It sound so romanceeeeeee! Strange that name is same as my ex boyfriend's name. That is exact how I feel about my ex boyfriend Bryce!!! You describe completely different appearance. My ex boyfriend have no freckles, his hair is red and brown mix together, plus god I love his blue-green soul eyes. Sadly we have to broke up :'( It cause my heart broke badly, my heart still ache for him. I never forget about him and miss our moment together what we does. :( But I really love your writing!!!
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SugarHeartedGirl Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, hon, I'm sorry you and your boyfriend broke up! I hope you feel better about it soon. And I'm really glad you liked my piece! :frail:
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LauraMizvaria Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Professional General Artist
Wow....
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SugarHeartedGirl Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Good wow? I'm guessing good wow. So thank you!
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LauraMizvaria Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Professional General Artist
Yes, definitely good wow! Haha...
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Ninefiftin Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think that this piece is both beautiful and clever. Original... well-written :heart:
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SugarHeartedGirl Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much. It's a prelude bit to a later story, which probably won't get posted on here for ages, but I wanted to put something. I'm glad you like it!
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Ninefiftin Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome ! I'm glad to know there could be something after this piece... and I hope it'll get posted lol XD
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