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He always stands very close to people when he speaks to them, staring with those huge golden eyes and leaning in ever so slightly, as if he is craving their touch and the feel of their breath and their hands more than anything. This is the first thing you notice when you meet him, the closeness. You ache, for a reason you don't know, to bridge the gap. To touch him. Your fingers twitch towards him but you keep your hands beside you.
And then you hear him speak, and everything else seems loud and bright and harsh compared to the gentleness of him. His lips are chapped and his big galaxy earrings glitter and his hair stands straight up and his freckles are like kisses, and you think he will sound like all the others and then he speaks; he speaks and something shifts inside you and a little storm begins to crackle and swell inside your chest and suddenly you love him more than anything.
And then he finishes asking you the time, and you tell him, and he walks on.
Okay this is Bryce he is pretty okay and things I write about him

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Thank you so much for the Daily Deviation! It means so much to me that people on here appreciate my work :heart: I'm just going to say thank you here to all you lovely people who commented on this: THANK YOU! And I love you tons and tons you wonderful sweeties. :iconbunnyglompplz:
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Given 2013-05-02
Bryce by ~SugarHeartedGirl is an unexpectedly heartbreaking vignette. ( Featured by neurotype )
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drifter-dallyings Nov 18, 2013  Student General Artist
 Hi! This lovely work has been featured here: fav.me/d6uqz9a.
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Sigma-Echo-Seven May 3, 2013  Student Writer
What a fascinating character portrait. Excellently described!
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Karinta May 3, 2013  Student General Artist
I like it a lot. You've painted a perfect portrait with your words.
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xlntwtch May 3, 2013   Writer
Congrats on the DD. This piece is so unexpected at the end, yet so briefly and wonderfully told, it's a definite :+fav: Thanks.
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goodgirl4 May 3, 2013  Student Filmographer
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karmacursed May 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A very sweet succinct peice of writing. Nice work.
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:heart: Congrats on the DD! :clap:
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TheGalleryOfEve May 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz: :iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
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xxConcreteRose May 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, I loved it. It's so honest and sweet. I felt my heart racing a little too
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GaleSpider May 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Really short and sweet. Shows the wanting desire to get near him. Congratulations on the DD!
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